Winners

Winners of the 2025 McKinney Writing Contest

Undergraduate Creative Prose and Drama

The language of “Persephone and I” is fresh and propulsive, imbuing the story of a typical night in the life of an adolescent boy with a sense of excitement and wonder. While the scenes are bustling and active with the energy of other young characters, the reader is made to identify closely with our protagonist— a young man who knows himself all too well but is still looking to find where he fits.

The story of canning peaches with one’s mother becomes an extended metaphor for the visceral quality of mother-daughter relationships and the way that early memories can sit in the body for a lifetime. The piece employs heavy language to express heavy emotions, yet uses form effectively to give breath to the heat circulating throughout the piece.

Maggie Smith, in her viral and now iconic poem, “Good Bones,” writes, “for every kind stranger, there is one who would break you, though I keep this from my children.” This is the sentiment at the heart of Wilburn’s short story, which offers us a window into the mind of a factory worker who leads his child to believe he’s a scientist. Bringing a refreshing dose of levity and grace to questions of truth and virtue, you’re sure to be thinking of this story the next time you find yourself in the parking lot of a Taco Bell.

Graduate Creative Prose & Drama

“Blink” is an entertaining political satirical twist on the classic Faustian bargain. The story’s diagnosis of our dystopian political moment hits hard. But it also presents a realist vision of democracy as a utopian aspiration, something that has to be fought for loudly, proudly, and every day—especially in the bleakest of times.

Undergraduate Poetry

Misra's winning poem, "3000", demonstrates a strong poetic voice anchored, yes, in its roots and its history, but also in the present-day, quotidian life of a student—connected to and yet necessarily removed from such a history. Misra writes with clean diction, elegant imagery, and textured detail to bring to life the anguish and pride, exhaustion and fearlessness of both her ancestors' experiences and her own. The result is a poem that reaches far beyond its undergraduate nascence and stands firmly on its own, carved-out ground.

Innes has created a deeply memorable poem--a haunting and melodious song that offers its beautiful imagery to the reader like a gift.

In her arresting poem, Mouille reflects on grief, love, and the body--both the visible and that which is invisible, only be felt. Here is a poem that changes the reader's breathing pattern for the terse moment during which it inhabits his or her thoughts.

Graduate Poetry

Smith's winning poem, "East of Denver", is a spare, lyrical poem, polished in its simplicity and in the strength of its imagery. Its gorgeous rhyme feels so organic it could be accidental, yet it remains utterly inevitable, moving the rhythm of the poem forward through a series of haunting images, memories, and meandering thoughts. The reader leaves the poem with more questions than answers, just as haunted as the speaker from within.

Philip’s poem speaks unhurriedly of things we inherit– desperate things. There are, indeed, wounds that can be bridge generations, passing from mother to daughter. The poem's message is as urgent as it is gorgeous.

In this unanticipated poem, Becz gives the reader something special: glimpses and flickers of memories, sharp and short and specific--moments of a summer day that invite the reader to sit and reflect for a while.

Undergraduate Academic Essay

This essay weaves historical research, cultural theory, and personal reflection into a seamless, elegant mediation on tea as a symbol and system of global inequality. The essay is rigorously sourced, thematically coherent, and critically engaged. This essay shines in making the ordinary extraordinary: a mundane, everyday object becomes a lens to examine empire, gender politics, and ecological ethics. Few essays manage to connect the global and the personal with such precision. 

Through a comparative analysis of films, the author deftly weaves complex quantum computing concepts with humanities and cultural studies to offer a nuanced and thoughtful analysis of cultural perspectives on time and space. The judges were especially impressed with how the author displayed interdisciplinary knowledge in a coherent and engaging way. In addition to a nuanced and insightful analysis, the author developed what they called a “quantum read,” which the judges found to be a unique contribution.

This essay offers an intellectually rigorous reading that both interprets McCullers’ work with deep insight and advances a powerful feminist critique. The author illuminates the novel with sensitivity and scholarly precision, offering not only close readings of the text but a broader intervention into how we understand girlhood, conformity, and power. The essay stands out for its originality in both scope and argument, and the writing, which is at a professional level. The judges encourage the author to submit this piece to a feminist literary journal. 

Through poignant examples, Raupp demonstrates how design choices target people who are unhoused, limiting the public sphere and pointing to the necessity for a new design paradigm.

The judges were impressed with Sahni’s ability to apply classic existential themes to contemporary media, as well as the author’s insightful questions about originality.

Graduate Academic Essay

This essay’s elegant use of critical ethnographic methods achieves a snapshot of localized knowledges and processes within the presence of the Indonesian coal industry. The author’s thoughtful prose focuses on the human experience of coal extraction beyond simple references to material extraction. The detailed focus of the fieldwork remains situated and grounded in method, creating a complex narrative worthy of our highest award for emergent graduate scholarship.

This thematic analysis of depictions of the Silk Road in historic RPGs makes good use of the concept of a “digital imaginary” to argue that the region is depicted as a “secondary other” in digital storytelling. Feng presents a measured, critical contrast of the themes present in the selected works with the “realities” of the Silk Road. This is a well-organized research project that is both methodologically sound and thoughtful about the choice of method.

Tursack creates a fine work exploring the concept of gravity in mediation as an embodied experience better understood via the study and language of affect and phenomenology. Of special interest to the judges was the authors identification of “boredom” and “alienation” as byproducts of poor gravitational representation, creating a fun distinction between the grander claims and the lived experience we face as dissatisfied viewers. Stylistically the essay has great promise, and the proposed novel conceptual framework of “discorrelation” in CGI is important and fascinating.

Undergraduate Electronic Media

Using fashion as a window into cultural history and incorporating evocative poetry inspired by iconic moments and movements in fashion, this excellent piece creates clever confluences and contrasts between illustrations, typography, and layout design.

This piece uses poetry to cleverly weave together color theory, design and text, grounding the theme, “Boundaries” in this engaging verbal-visual book.

This original scenario for a tabletop roleplaying game is set in the haunted ruins of a village populated by complicated undead beings, and it promises an engaging game that will force its players into difficult moral quandaries.

Graduate Electronic Media

This multifaceted, experimental and self-reflexive piece is as provocative as it is mesmerizing in its productive flattening of quotation, commentary, and A.I. Generated texts. In concert with its myriad text forms, it layers photographic, video, and technically-oriented images supported by a sound environment that is equal parts haunting, piercing, and meditative.

This text-based video game centers on the harassment of a character named Veronica and positions the player in the shoes of the harasser. It has elements of whimsy, but also of frustration, annoyance, and disgust as it satirically speaks to the experience of repeatedly being the subject of unwanted romantic advances.

Mixed Genre Undergraduate Creative Writing/Performance: Writing for Social Change

This work ingeniously draws upon Jonathan Swift's renowned satire “A Modest Proposal,”  spinning out the interconnectedness of America’s socio-political issues: capitalism, healthcare, welfare, and mass shootings. This piece is not for the faint of heart; however, neither is making social change. Extremity and gallows humor are often the best ways to draw attention to social wrongs. They are also tools often used by the marginalized. This is a highly creative and inventive piece of writing.

This essay intimately captures the friendship, identity, dating, alcoholism, and the bar scene from the point of view of an LGBTQ narrator.

A fascinating work of creative nonfiction about place and change, the effects of gentrification and class differences. The level of specificity in the details allows readers to vividly picture the places Tse takes them.

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